Every inch of me trembles
like I've never seen the light of day.
The slightest of things bug the hell out of me
but you don't seem to give a shit...
I guess it's just because we weren't meant to be.
I knew things you never told me...
That was only because I prepared for the worst.
You never gave a shit about anything did you?!
Did you?
We were happy
we were sad it's a wounder how we made it out of bed.
To face the world
to face the day...I don't see how we didn't break sooner.
We fell to pieces but were unwilling to shatter
I don't see how we didn't fall all the way through to the floor.
You and me weren't meant to be
but still how could you do this to me?
Cheating is the worst thing
you said you weren't but what a lie!
So you never gave a shit did you?
Did you?
I still can't believe you left this all up to me.
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First time I have ever written with cursing I don't know if I'm particularly found of it at the moment or if I want to write more like this but it's worth a try....true life experience.
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I feel that there's always a better way of putting it. Then again, I prefer symbolic metaphors over bluntness in poetry.
But really, poetry is about what YOU feel is right. I don't feel right cursing in mine,but that doesn't mean I don't like poetry that does have cursing.
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Ni YingGai Pa TiaWu De Gui!!! : O
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Wtf is Micheal Jackson doing with your balls Johnny?!
RawEm0tion is what my happiness is made out of!
but other than that i don't curse
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She sobbed,
for the pain in her heart was unbearable,
as if it was being torn apart.
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I Am Who I Am,
Just Deal With It.
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Wtf is Micheal Jackson doing with your balls Johnny?!
RawEm0tion is what my happiness is made out of!
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She sobbed,
for the pain in her heart was unbearable,
as if it was being torn apart.
______________
I Am Who I Am,
Just Deal With It.
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Wtf is Micheal Jackson doing with your balls Johnny?!
RawEm0tion is what my happiness is made out of!
what a coincidence we both just posted a poem starting with every inch of me, although the rest of yours is better, haha
and i really love this, all over.
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I swear I'm sorry.
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IDK Mii BFF Jesus?
OoH. EmM. GeE. Hallelujah!
Rock me Sexy Jesus!
That's because I started writing mine and then I stopped because I couldn't get into it and then I read yours and fixed it up a little bit...hehe..Thanks I really like your though!!!
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Wtf is Micheal Jackson doing with your balls Johnny?!
RawEm0tion is what my happiness is made out of!
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